I nEEd a tiTLE
Thursday, 21 June 2007
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I nEEd a tiTLE
4
responses
dusty
bookish
room
with tired shelves
mustard
and
chocolate brown
cockroaches
and
glass-eyed dalmatians
in corners
cucumber rinds
two fish in a bowl
cocoa
coffee house
without a staircase
'Liar' birds
glazed
in
yellowed
ochre
air
stuffed
in a room
that is.
Kim,
I think a one-word title fits well. Knitted/connected objects, color is central, and it is a scene.
How about "Skein" (?)
thank you HD
this was an early poem that I wrote as reaction to a room that I saw in a dream....so your title is really appropriate...brown was the dominating colour...and there were many random objects in the room...
The room appears to be in disarray, with so many things not in order. I suggest "disarray".
thanks Drive
that's a great title and fits the dream as it was like a jigsaw puzzle that didn't quite fit together......