I nEEd a tiTLE
Friday, 10 August 2007
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I nEEd a tiTLE
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Your eyes so sage have smiled
for five fitfully full years
half a decade
just a glance away
a bar length away
crinkling
at the corners
smirking scotch fully
I drank it then
Your teddy bear hugs
hide me
from myopic men
who leer too long
and
I feel safe
with your friendship
Hmmmm... 'The Bartender'
Eh, well okay, maybe I need another drink...
LOL;
Anna
haha Anna
I like this title a lot !!!!!very fitting for the background to this poem .... the setting was a pub :)
It is such a hard thing to name a creation of someone else's but they are beautiful words that hold endless thought within them. Perhaps... 'The Friend Within'
I know what you mean Boyd.....
your title illuminates the reflective nature of this poem.....thank you :)
The Bartender do sound good... I'll agree on that
hi Edrei
nice to meet you and...
thanks for your comment :-)
your are creatif. can mixed collection become one.